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The cliff I’m standing on,
alone,
doesn’t have a view.
And even though the music
is building to crescendo,
it’s a piercing sound of terror,
and chaos.
I’m eating the chocolates
that you gave me,
but I’m not high enough to fall
for you.

They taste like nausea
and discomfort.
They taste like disappointment.
The wine we drank,
the aphrodisiac you chose,
isn’t enough
to rise above my fear.
And I’m too high to fall
for you.
But I can see the rocks below.

The walk we took,
and the moonlight, weren’t
romantic.
They were pressure.
They were persuasion.
And I’m falling,
But not for you,
Not into love.
©2006-2009 ~EcholaliaRicochet
:iconecholaliaricochet:

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A rejection? Or an incompatiablity?

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:iconbeautelle:
wow, that's nice. thought provoking. was it inspired by anything?

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~ * I never have a bad day. If I begin having one, I try to do everything within my power to turn it good!
:iconecholaliaricochet:
Just a couple of recent experiences with males of the species... One day, I hope, there'll be a "right" one. Lol.

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The Arrow flies into the black night,
If there is nothing to draw me to the light
I fall to the Void
I drown
:iconbeautelle:
^_^ keep your chin up, i'm sure there will be ^_^

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~ * I never have a bad day. If I begin having one, I try to do everything within my power to turn it good!
:iconhybridcritter:
I love the last verse, very surprising.

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"When you sin, sin big."
:iconecholaliaricochet:
Thank you. I kind of just had to churn this one out before it ate me :)

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The Arrow flies into the black night,
If there is nothing to draw me to the light
I fall to the Void
I drown
:iconhybridcritter:
I know what that can be like :)

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"When you sin, sin big."
:iconwickka:
this is really beautiful! :)
I love the words you used and it really has this kind of weird atmosphere, well done! :D
:iconecholaliaricochet:
Thanks very much :)

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The Arrow flies into the black night,
If there is nothing to draw me to the light
I fall to the Void
I drown
:iconleviathanslover:
thats really supertastic hon

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Dont say I'm the one you want to lose
Time goes on but we dont have to
Dont tell me I have to go
Dont tell me I'm the one
You used to love
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pain is the only reality

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